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Dancing with God.
A twirl, and a nod
every vestage of glory
revealed to me

pure and clean
I have not yet seen
the sin and hate
that fills this place

but then a dark aura
fills the air
as the angel of hate
enters the room

he takes my hand
intrigueing me
with promises of happyness
that I already posess

I do not see God
calling to me
for sin is full
in my view

I begin to search
and I soon find
a new dance partner
of which to call mine

As I spin round and round
my head does the same
this high was not happy
it only added to my shame

God is still calling
despretely pleading
watching me make
mistake after mistake

but I do not see him
as a new partner walks in
and the sinful tango
begins again

He gives me a rose
and my heart flutters
and with a gentlmanly bow
he takes my prized gem

and I am shamed again
God is still there
calling my name
but I do not see

another partner
carrying a knife
then i cut and bleed
And I hate my life

but then he pulls out
a powerful device
a device so strong
It could end my life

he coaxes me
to end the pain
but thats when i see god
there all this time

all my sins grab me
as I try to run to him
and I just cant make it
there's too many there

They began to beat me
torturing me here
and I cry out in pain,
shame, and dispare

That was when God
entered the mix
he wanted to help me
but they turned to him

they beat him
he bleeds
a visage of death
there on a cross

all hope was lost
or so it seemed
but my lord and my god
claimed VICTORY

then...

I danced with God
a twirl and a nod
And I feel so
warm and safe

pure and clean
the hurt forgotten
because I have seen
his glory

Eternity calling

Dancing with God, forevermore...
:iconjessiejordan:
Dancing with God...
This is not my life story but it is a friend of mine's.

I want to make a note that the fifth partner in this story is depression and that isn't nessisarily a sin...but it can keep you from god. or it this case it can lead you to God.

If you have any questions feel free to ask.
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~XxchantellexX Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh man. This is so beautiful I almost cried.
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~JessieJordan Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I cant take any credit except holding the pen...these aren't my words.
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~XxchantellexX Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Whose words are they? O.o
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~JessieJordan Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It was all God is what I'm saying. I couldn't have done this myself.
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~XxchantellexX Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
OHHHHH~!
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~JessieJordan Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^
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I'm agreeing with animehearts1322. This poem is beautifully written and wonderfully descriptive, and I pray that your friend is alright now.

GOD BLESS
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~JessieJordan Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes she is. ^-^ Thank you.
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I'm glad to hear that. :) GOD BLESS.
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~JessieJordan Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^
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