Genre(s): Shojo, Romance, School life, Slice of life, Comedy, Drama
MCs: Kay Adalli, James Miller, Nathan Tye
Decription: Kay Adalli has never dated anyone in her life. Her focus has always been on God. But when she goes to a Christian College for a degree in Children's Ministry, she finds it to be not what she expected. And then she meets James Miller; a soon-to-be minister who's brilliant, focused, and responcible. Soon after she meets Nathan Tye; a talented music leader who's cocky, unpredictable, and able to sweep any girl off thier feet. Soon though, the two guys both fall for her. Kay of course, is totally clueless. Will she survive a faith shaking tradgedy, college stress, and the on-going battle between her two best friends?
Note: A christian college has never been touched on in manga and I thought would make an interesting setting. I have personal experiance with christian campuses and the relational web that forms in a year of school at one. None of the views portrayed are meant to insult. But maybe they'll get you thinking.
Setting: Modern day, midwestern USA, at a christian campus.
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are you sure wanna making your draw to be manga style?
i'm afraid if i'm wrong give comment and suggestion to you before i know what draw style do you want learn
just wait my comments about your comic...
i wanna read it before
Page 1 --> panel 2 = the expression is wrong, it looks smile whereas she lost, the expression would be afraid/glum
Page 4 --> panel 4 = the expression is wrong, seem your drew it by smile mouth
cause she said “but” exact expression would be droopy/sad
I know you draw directly by computer using tablet cause don’t have a scanner. What do you draw the sketch your comic to be original lineart your comic?
If yes, your lineart looks in disarray/isn’t neat so I suggest you if finished to make sketch in one layer then make one layer again as place original lineart your comic which made to according line of your sketch use thickness line without slight lines there, after it finished then delete the sketch layer. It might hard to work twice but that way can make your lineart neat and looking manga line.
Btw what are kind of softwares you use to make your comic and put screentones?
Sorry if my words make your heart break, I just wanna help