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Genre(s): Shojo, Romance, School life, Slice of life, Comedy, Drama

MCs: Kay Adalli, James Miller, Nathan Tye

Decription: Kay Adalli has never dated anyone in her life. Her focus has always been on God. But when she goes to a Christian College for a degree in Children's Ministry, she finds it to be not what she expected. And then she meets James Miller; a soon-to-be minister who's brilliant, focused, and responcible. Soon after she meets Nathan Tye; a talented music leader who's cocky, unpredictable, and able to sweep any girl off thier feet. Soon though, the two guys both fall for her. Kay of course, is totally clueless. Will she survive a faith shaking tradgedy, college stress, and the on-going battle between her two best friends?

Note: A christian college has never been touched on in manga and I thought would make an interesting setting. I have personal experiance with christian campuses and the relational web that forms in a year of school at one. None of the views portrayed are meant to insult. But maybe they'll get you thinking.

Setting: Modern day, midwestern USA, at a christian campus.
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*haneiy Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the story so far! Keep it up!
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~JessieJordan Sep 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^-^
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~Zaida-Airtif Aug 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
before i give comment about this comic :D
are you sure wanna making your draw to be manga style?
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~JessieJordan Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry I didn't fully understand that.
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~Zaida-Airtif Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
just make sure :D
i'm afraid if i'm wrong give comment and suggestion to you before i know what draw style do you want learn :iconinuheheheplz:
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~JessieJordan Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
my style is taken from manga and realistic. And the soft almost screentonelessness is simply me not knowing how use screentone properly. It turns out that people actually liked it so I stuck with it.
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~Zaida-Airtif Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh i see :D
just wait my comments about your comic...
i wanna read it before :la:
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~JessieJordan Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ok ^-^
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~Zaida-Airtif Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
About your comic, I think the story is good, arranged panels are efficiency except in page 4 and I found little mistakes :
Page 1 --> panel 2 = the expression is wrong, it looks smile whereas she lost, the expression would be afraid/glum :D
Page 4 --> panel 4 = the expression is wrong, seem your drew it by smile mouth
cause she said “but” exact expression would be droopy/sad :D

I know you draw directly by computer using tablet cause don’t have a scanner. What do you draw the sketch your comic to be original lineart your comic?
If yes, your lineart looks in disarray/isn’t neat so I suggest you if finished to make sketch in one layer then make one layer again as place original lineart your comic which made to according line of your sketch use thickness line without slight lines there, after it finished then delete the sketch layer. It might hard to work twice but that way can make your lineart neat and looking manga line.

Btw what are kind of softwares you use to make your comic and put screentones?

Sorry if my words make your heart break, I just wanna help :la:
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~JessieJordan Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm using corel painter. People seem to like the soft look and i only know how to achieve that with the watercolor feature in corel. the reason i use my original sketch is because i cant draw one continuous line smoothly well. I can do it traditionally with pencils and pen but as you know i dont have that option. This manga is partially just for entertainment and practice. I really am just a beginner I started drawing manga 7 years ago and have pretty much figured it out all on my own. I havent had any formal art training not even school cuz ive been homeschooled. So...this is where i am. I will work on my line art. Thank you for your critisism.
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